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Flaming dawn part 2: City on fire, the evil girl and the old friend!

Posted by shadowRian - July 22nd, 2012


Inferno: *sets the spear on fire and throws it at golem*
golem: SHIT *dodges it at the last second*
*Helios Roars and breaths a wall of fire between Golem and Inferno*
Inferno: good thinking Helios, Golem ill get back too you once this city is burned to the ground but dont worry i wont be leaving you here alone you can deal with my Flame spawns!
*two flaming dogs and about eight masked dudes with flaming bodies come through the wall of fire*
Golem: *yells as loud as he can* FUCKING PUSSY!!!! *looks around him trying to think how to survive this*
Flamespawn: *with a demonic voice says* WE DESTROY YOU! MASTER WILL BE PROUD! GOLEM MUST..
Golem: SHUT THE FUCK UP! *Golem breaks the Flamespawns head by hitting it hard with his chain* then thinks: (damn that's one only 7 and 2 dogs left...FUCK)
*a Flamespawn dog bites Golem on the shoulder*
Golem: AAAAGH *feels the blood pouring from his shoulder and dripping from his arm*
Flamespawn 2: YOU WILL DIE SOON, MASTER WILL BE PROUD!
Golem: i don't care about your master *takes out his uzi and shoots the second Flamespawn* fuck he's right... i'm gonna die..
???: *a girls voice yells from beyond the wall of fire* YOUR NOT JUST GONNA GIVE UP ARE YOU!
Golem: (that voice... i've heard it before)
*the wall of fire gets blown away by some-kind of purple aura and the girl: scarlet walks towards Golem*
scarlet: wow they hurt you pretty bad! *stares at the wound on Golem's shoulder *
Flamespanws: ITS HER, ITS THE EVIL GIRL!!!
scarlet: oh so your fighting inferno huh?
Golem: you know him?
scarlet: yeah me and my partner fought against him once!
Golem: your partner?
scarlet yeah...he's an old friend of mine and an old friend of yours, you probably wont remember him though!
Flamespawn: we kill her! master will be very proud!!!
*all of the flame spawns run at her and get ready to attack*
scarlet: stupid idea! *the purple aura grows larger and stronger and she gets an evil smile on her face, like she was some kind of monster*
*scarlet pushes Golem away and obliterates all the enemies around her using what looked like a purple monster*
Golem: What the fuck!...how is that possible!?
Scarlet: *says with an evil voice* Golem go..GO stop inferno from completly destroying the city!
*Golem runs, he runs as far as he can until he notices a roar*
Golem: *looks around the city *then thinks: (fuck Everything is on fire! the city is burining too the ground i have to stop him!)
???: *from behind Golem* GOLEM!!! your not gonna do this alone! im gonna help you out on this one!
golem: kage is that you? *turns around and notices a man with a black sword, a gas mask a pair of red eyes peering through the goggles of the gas mask*
???: don't remember me Golem? how are you treating my chain and Uzi that i passed on too you!
Golem: *gets a flashback*
~
10 year old Golem: hey Ikari, how come you get to play with cool weapons!
15 year old Ikari: because its my responsibility to protect this city right now!
kid Golem: but i wanna protect the city too!
teen Ikari: sigh fine! here *gives Golem an empty Uzi and a chain* don't let the people in the orphanage see this *wraps it up with his jacket* Me and scarlet have to go on a little adventure now, we will tell you all about it when we get back wont we scarlet?
13 year old scarlet: *nods* yeah...sure!
Ikari: *as he's walking away* take care of the city while i'm gone OK Golem? *smiles and turns his red eyes towards scarlet*
kid Golem: *as they leave Golem looks down at his new weapons* i have to take care of the city while he's gone!
~
Golem: Ikari! its you!
Ikari: heh took you long enough you little punk!
Golem: you were gone for 6 years! dude where the hell Were you!
Ikari: id love to tell you about it but there's a dragon tearing the city apart right now!
Golem: right, Lets take it down together then!
Ikari: yeah, i cant wait to see you in action Golem!

end of part 2
NEXT PART: FINAL BATTLE, CITY AT PEACE, and THE MASTERMIND REVEALED!


Comments

...awesome... :D!!!

Ahh! Scarlet's a badass! I randomly thought of Ikari as a character from the Madness series lol.
The flashback was great.

Looking forward to the next part! \m/

thanks for the comment :D, lol i can see why you saw Ikari that way i mean the black sword, the red eyes and when i reveal his power, he's definitely gonna remind you of someone from madness. and watch out because the next part will be brutal, i promise you blood, some deaths and badass powers!

FUN FACT: Ikari was one of the main characters of my failed comic, expect to see more characters from the fialed comic too! THE COMIC WAS THE STORY OF IKARI's six year adventure and the group he traveled with named the Shadow syndicate :3

THEME SONG OF THIS PART: fireproof by pillar

nice job man

thanks :3

dammit rip i was gunna put a song for part 2 first u whore XD im gunna read this like in a few minutes im just putting my finishing touchs on part 2 prepare for a long part

all i know based on ur picture shits going to go down on that city

yup i wouldn't put down random pictures becuase it throws people off of the story and lol sorry i had to put that certain song in, you know since everything was on fire and crap lol

when i wa reading the end i was late and i was like FUCK ITS IKARI. but anyways i love love just love scarlet i like ikari and when the flame guy was talking i knew golem was going to say that and i laughted at my predictament. cant wait for some suff to happen i mean alot of stuff has happened i cant wait for more stuff to happen in my opinion ur doing a pretty swell job and i still like ur format of how ur writing the story fast paced gets u really into the story good job rip o yah and its all about two rip not, 3, TWO

yeah the next part is gonna be pretty awesome, we got a boss battle, we got two mian badasses we have a sexy badass and we have a kickass cop! lol i dont even know where to start for the next part... :p