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Flaming dawn part 1: The girl, the dragon and the Rider!

Posted by shadowRian - June 28th, 2012


If you didn't Read the "behemoths wrath" story or the "flaming dawn" intro you should do that before reading this youll find those stories in the news tab... ENJOY :3

*Golem stands up and smirks*
Kage- what, why are you smiling like that?
*waiter walks over to them*
waiter- alright you two, who's gonna pay the bill?
Kage- well, i guess you'll pay this time Golem....*looks at the empty seat in front of him* SON OF A BI...
Golem-*starts his motorcycle* sorry Kage, but I'm broke
*as Golem turns the corner he notices a giant bird like figure fly overhead*
Golem- what the fuck did i just see?, whatever it was probably nothing... i hope.
*he hears a scream of a women in a nearby alley and gets off his bike to check out the situation, he gets to the alley and peeks around the corner*
girl-Let go of me!!
thug 1- no way you shouldnt be out at a late time like this, you want me to show you why?
thug 2- yeah you should show her why...or at least let me show her why...
*Golem gets ready to save the girl but as he gets ready to show himself the girl kicks the first thug in the nuts and grabs the other thug's head and slams it into the wall*
Golem- *stops looking down the alley* oh shit i almost rescued a psycho, why does everyone in this city act so weird?
girl-*behind him* ahem
Golem- *turns around quickly with a goofy look on his face* um sorry for calling you that, so i guess your fine, right?
girl- sure Golem.
Golem- I'm glad you are...wait how the hell do you know my name? and do i know you?
girl- I've been watching you for some time now... ever since the behemoth incident and no you don't know me but, i can tell you my name its Scarlet.
Golem- Scarlet huh? (this girl, there's some-kind of weird purple aura coming from her, what the fuck is she?)
*a loud crash following a loud roar and people screaming interrupts their conversation and golem looks to see whats going on and the sight he saw was a dragon blowing fire at everything it saw, Golem turns back to find that the girl wasn't there anymore*
Golem- shit, what should i do!....sigh...*comes out of the alley and confronts the dragon and its rider*
Inferno- Ahh well if it isn't the masters favorite Pet, Golem
Golem- master? are you talking about the bastard that Behemoth was after?
Inferno- yeah
Golem- OK first off Tell me who your are and how is it that you have a FUCKING DRAGON!!!
inferno- hehehe I... Am inferno, my family were burned down in a fire at our house started by your government! you do not realize how corrupt the nova city government is boy! this is why i, Behemoth, my master... fight against them!
Golem- the government did that? why?
inferno- to silence my family! we found out about their deepest darkest secrets. But now all that remains are me and my son. after that fire my master found me and healed me up. the best part of it all is that he gave me this beauty! *rubs his hand on the dragons head* his name is Helios and he is the best thing to happen to me since the fire!
Golem- well i know you want revenge and all but i cant let you burn anything else.
Inferno- *raises his spear* i thought you'd understand, but it seems I'm going to have to kill you! DIE GOLEM!!!!
TO BE CONTINUED

will golem beat the dragon and the rider? will he ever meet the girl agian? Where the Fuck is kage? find all this out in the next part!

Flaming dawn part 1: The girl, the dragon and the Rider!


Comments

inferno- wears a mask,his face is scared from burns, weapons: spear(likes to set it on fire) a flaminf sword,
Helios the dragon- color: brown, features- has weapons attached to him, weapons: Gatling guns and napalm bomb
also this story might be 3 or 4 parts...
and the girl wasn't a random thing... its actually a important part.

YES!!! Ah, man! That was pretty good. I liked how Scarlet just kicked ass...bravo. Golem's funny. Inferno's pretty beast...and he has a dragon. EPIC. Can't wait to read more!

:D \m/ brutal.

yeah, i thought it would be best if Golem had a sense of humor, and scarlet will become an important part of this series of stories pretty soon, inferno a badass from birth lol, and here's a cool fact Inferno's master has a fascinating power that will be revealed in the next story arc : P but for the next part you'll finally get to see Kage in action! thanks for the comment it means alot!

Hells yeah, Ur welcome

Looking forward to reading more and Kage! :D

ill try not to disappoint :P

nice man

thanks mario :D

I like it!

The game was Crysis, but I think you already knew that.

yup thats one of my favorite games i like the 2nd one also

i really like it , the chill atmosphere while stuff is going on like crazy , o and im liking scarlet a lot i hope shes like a manipulator and i feel u based off this small scene of the picture in my opinion dont do that it shows that u need pictures to help you work. and rip u and ur comments i knew from the second we met scar she was important. As for me and my horsemen i am still working on part 2 its sooooooo hard goddam shits gunna go down but yah really liking ur story keep it up ripper3000 ( remember that good times good times)

thanks for the comment, lol it seems you already know more than what ive explianed :p and about the visual picture you get id like to leave that to the readers imagination, hell you guys could tell me what you see when you read this id love to hear the different pictures people come up with, and i wish you luck on the horsemen story, part 1 was awesome and im looking foward to part2, ahh yes the times when i was known as riper3000 was good times indeed :p ill be diong the part 2 of mine by next week.

Eeyup. I didn't have an epic computer back when 2 came out, so I played on the xbox. I was like, top 30 in the world for the online beta. That was back when mt GT was still gm0d42.

yeah i sucked at multiplayer lol but the singleplayer story was good...