Flaming dawn intro

shadowRian

riper3000 ish back! aka.. Ripes aka. shadowrian aka. SDRN . status: Adulting(Help!?) : Anime, V-games, Zombies, Writing(typing :P), Art, Movies newgrounds and Dubstep/EDM Dislikes: nothing much

Age 29, Male

usa,New Jersey

Joined on 1/10/12

Level:: 5
Exp Points:: 222 / 280
Exp Rank:: > 100,000
Vote Power:: 4.29 votes

Rank:: Civilian
Global Rank:: > 100,000
Blams:: 0
Saves:: 26
B/P Bonus:: 0%

Whistle:: Normal

Medals:: 339

Flaming dawn intro

Posted by shadowRian - June 16th, 2012

(after behemoth died he met a young swat survivor named Kage since then those two been saving the city together, by now its been six months since the behemoth incident)
*the two are siting at a table in a fast food restaurant*
Golem- heh, yeah and that's how i took down the "Crazed tiger"
Kage- that's sweet, hey did you hear about the outskirts forest burning down... the farmers say that it was a dragon, heh sounds BS too me.
Golem- well... so far I've seen superhuman criminals, ghosts, giant rats and many other stuff like that, so it wouldn't surprise me but still a dragon seems a little too unreal...
Kage- well this is Nova city, where anything can happen, ha ha
~elsewhere~
???: you know what to do "inferno" don't fail me like that fool behemoth did
Inferno: heh heh heh, ME and my pet wont fail, we will burn Nova city TO DUST!!!
*dragon looks up and blows fire into the sky*
END OF INTRO

Flaming dawn intro

Comments

Log in to Comment

shadowRian 2012-06-16 22:30:30

Golem- age 15, spiky hair, hiar color is brown, fav weapons are: chains and SMG's
Kage- age 18, spiky hair, hair color is black, fav weapons are: shotgun, m9 and m4a1, (also part of swat)

Spikedemonic23 2012-06-17 19:02:53

I love that! It's like the typical meeting place of badasses! That was a nice intro!

Can't wait for more! I'm interested in this Inferno character :D

shadowRian 2012-06-17 19:02:53

thanks, do you like the fact that for the rest of the story golem and kage are gonna work together? and you Will find out more about inferno, and his task to destroy Nova city in the full Part 1.

Tridentking 2012-06-18 00:54:07

spiky hair for the win

anyways super humans giant rats and ghosts, nova city where anything can happen even a pet dragon burning a forest down. so the first part of the saga i presume it to be is called flaming dawn which the main antagonist is a villain known as inferno, i cant wait to see how this will go into place.

i like Golem just a normal boy taking out "things" for the hell of it to keep order. i cant wait to see how he is or how his personality is. but if golem is a righteous fellow then he is weak to betrayal since if it were to happen it would impact him in a way that he trusted this person and then this happened. but all this is my prediction.

now for my review, i like how golem boasted about his winnings and how u introed the villains i cant wait to see what happens next. question- will we get to see a slice on how life is on Nova city

shadowRian 2012-06-18 00:54:07

thanks for the review ill tell you golem's personality right now, hes not as righteous as you think he is, he's just sick and tired of all the crime in the city. he deosnt trust the government and he's somewhat of a hoodlum. the only person he really trusts is kage (even though he's part of the swat).
yeah i might throw in a slice of how life is in nova city in the full part 1 and let me tell you this its far from peaceful lol.

Tridentking 2012-06-18 00:54:48

o yah and i see a dragon in the picture CREEPY

shadowRian 2012-06-18 00:54:48

lol your comment just made the picture much more cooler thanks :P

generalmario 2012-06-21 16:24:22

looks good man

shadowRian 2012-06-21 16:24:22

thanks for the comment

Flaming dawn intro

Comments

Log in to Comment

Main Sections

Extra, Extra!

Community

NG Related