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Behemoths Wrath part 2

Posted by shadowRian - June 3rd, 2012


Here it is the final part last of Behemoths Wrath, this ones a little more action packed then the last so, enjoy. don't forget to comment.

Golem: *slams into the window of a bar and lands on a wooden table which breaks when it was landed on* Ugh Shit that hurt,

Behemoth: * at the other end of the street behemoth calls his criminal minions to him* Listen up, I want you two too take out that Little BITCH over there, I don't feel like wasting the rest of my energy on him *the giant wipes the blood off his forehead*

Minions- we'll kill that Fucker for ya, boss!*the two skinny, prison escapee's sprint towards their target pulling out their combat knives*

Golem: *feels pain on his back and arms, looks at his arms and sees that it was scared by the broken glass and could tell that the table was the cause of his back's pain and looks up and notices the minions coming at him* he thinks: (Fuck, I'm NOT going to die HERE, NOT NOW!) *looks around for his chain and mac10*

minion 1: *approaching* What, Are looking for, huh fucker?

Golem: *locates his weapons and sprints toward them, ignoring his back and arm pain. he picks the weapons up*

minion 1: *dives into the open broken window with minion 2 soon following* sorry but you've reached a deadline kid!

Golem: I'm supposed to be the one to say that Bitch *aims the chain at his neck, the chain wraps around his neck and Golem tugs on it HARD and snaps the minions neck*

minion 2: *watches his buddy fall to the ground and lay in a still position* FUCK THIS, I'm OUTTA HERE *tries to run*

Golem: *takes out his mac 10 and sprays a full clip at the minions back*

minion 2: *screams "BOOOOOOSSSSS!!!" as he falls dead to the ground*

Behemoth: *turns around and spots 2 dead minions and an angry Golem* What the Hell, You should be dead!

Golem: shut the hell up!! *runs at behemoth only to get knocked to the ground by Him* Why? why are you destroying stuff?

Behemoth: i escaped from Prison, i came to this city and the reason I'm here is For revenge. I was destroying stuff to get his Attention, then those Damn swat troops came and interrupted me, and then You Came and killed my must trusted minions!!

Golem- whatever, wait Who's attention were you trying to Get?

Behemoth- since your gonna be killed here i might as well tell you... i was trying to get N..*out of nowhere a 50.cal bullet went straight through the giants head and when he fell, the ground shook a little*

Golem- MOTHER FUCKER, who the Hell did..!!*looks around but see's nothing but the news helicopter*

News reporter: I cant believe it, i don't know how he did it but, a teenager just defeated the criminal monster known as Behemoth.

The End?

???:*standing on the rooftop chatting to him/ her self* sorry boy i really wanted to see you fight! But your not ready for that kind of information yet, but don't worry we'll see each other again real soon! HAHAHAHAHAAA

The End?= HELL NO

Golem's story may be over but there's still some mysteries to uncover, Who was that mystery person? who killed Behemoth?who will be our next hero... or villain? Who ate my chocolate bar? Find out in the next Few Story arcs. :P

Next story arc: FLAMING DAWN

Behemoths Wrath part 2


Comments

2 questions for you guys, do you want me to take the Censors off since thier pretty much useless? and do you guys want me to continue writing things like this or what?

Yeah, take out the censors! This is an action piece and should be expressed to the max! :D
And yes keep writing like this, this could become a comic. I'm imagining the characters in my head and they loook pretty sweet :D

Ok, that end was just wow...I had to read it again. So there is another, huh? Haha, a kid wiped the behemoth out...awesome. I must know who that is!!! Dude, you writing another?

yup ive been getting some feedback and pepole are saying that i should continue. so thats what i will do. Look out for the next story arc, in my created world of action the name is : THE FLAMING DAWN... its gonna be awesome and ill take censors off, thanks for the review

The Flaming Dawn huh and again i will hold a spoiler question.
I liked behemoth more the golem honestly i liked how you gave him feeling, towards minions people who r sopposed to be tools. u have skills i hope you build on to golems life and all overall nice sneek peak of the arc. Sorry for the late review i was working on a story of my own stay tuned haha

lol ill check it out and thanks for the review and who knows this might not be the last of behemoth :3

Nice story i guess.

lol thanks for taking the time read it and also thanks for the review