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News reporter: We have just received word that a Neighborhood menace named Behemoth has just eliminated the local S.W.A.T. team!
Golem: *at his house watching the news* damn this dude took out the S.W.A.T? what useless pieces of S***'s. I think its time This town needs a real Hero.*grabs his mac10 stored under his couch cushion and chain right next to it and then kicks open his door.*
Golem thinks: (i heard this guy was at raven street, gotta get there quick) *he gets on his motor cycle and speeds towards raven street*
Golem: *as he approaches he notices the marks on the buildings from the previous battle with Behemoth and the S.W.A.T. team*
Behemoth*with his deepish voice says*: Who dares approach Me!?!?
Golem:*takes out his chain* I'm here too stop you Behemoth.*notices how Huge behemoth is*
Behemoth: What the hell did you say punk? *drops the S.W.A.T officer he was punching and turns around*
Golem: you heard me, I'm here to STOP YOU!!! * charges at him and swings his chain at Behemoth and hits him directly in the head*
Behemoth: *Behemoth's head starts to bleed* heheheh..HAHAHAHAHAHA! was that supposed to hurt kid? what a weak attack!*the giant criminal grabs Golem and flings him down the street*
END OF PART 1

PART 2 COMING SOON