Cool stuff. Only criticism/feedback I have for you is work on the grammar; like commas and stuff. Other than that, pretty cool stuff.
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thanks ill try my best to fix this up. this needs to be the best one right here :p
aw, man! That was great, always looking forward for more :D
lol thanks i like making these and i enjoy when people read them, so i say thanks once more!!! :)
Hello there i am doctor rabbit!
lol hi doctor wabbit
Rip it has been tooo damn long (currently typing paper) i see your keeping strong with your story. mine is still in production ;) but yah snap reaping is going to happen shinigamis up in this mofo. i hope inferno dies permenently XD LONG LIVE THE FINAL 4 <-----(What could that mean hmmm? dont answer that)
~trident
oh heeeey!! it has been too long, but yeah the next story will come once i stop getting an endless onslaught of qiuzes, tests and exams... and yes...this is the begging of the end!
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the more tips/help the better its gonna make it for you guys!