riper3000 ish back! aka.. Ripes aka. shadowrian aka. SDRN . status: Adulting(Help!?) : Anime, V-games, Zombies, Writing(typing :P), Art, Movies newgrounds and Dubstep/EDM Dislikes: nothing much
Age 29, Male
usa,New Jersey
Joined on 1/10/12
0_0 wow...ONCE AGAIN---AWESOME! :D
Dude, I was all confused with the names of the characters then had to read back a part just to put it all together XP Ikari scared me for a moment just cause he was as powerful as Nero...man!
I love these characters, I would have loved more scarlet but I get why she wasn't in this one :)
Keep up the good work!
yup but still wasn't as epic as a finale i would've hoped it was..(maybe it was because there was no scarlet :P) and ikari not so much of a hero as you think but you probably already realized that. but next story is gonna be even more gruesome... Nero will have anger issues, warpath we show his awesomeness and scarlet will kick more ass lol thanks for the comment
oh, and i loved the song with this. Good choice.
i immediately new this was the right song right after i thought about inferno and ikari.
U always have a good way to explain thing like the virus and powers ( o by the way hey). I like the heroic ending wich intros a new plot and stuff. Ur a good writer u should like write a story for ur school or a contest chances are u might win ( o scored a 4/5 on a college placement test hehe)
I AM AWAITING UR NEXT PART
i like that idea! and the next part wont be in a while... i need to figure out and make a fresh storyline of which will be new to all who read...
shadowRian
So watcha guys think? what are your feeling's on the story? who's your favorite and Sorry there was no scarlet in this one :( do you think the song fit with the story? (listen to the lyrics closely)