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    riper3000 ish back! aka.. Ripes aka. shadowrian aka. SDRN . status: Adulting(Help!?) : Anime, V-games, Zombies, Writing(typing :P), Art, Movies newgrounds and Dubstep/EDM Dislikes: nothing much

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    2 questions for you guys, do you want me to take the Censors off since thier pretty much useless? and do you guys want me to continue writing things like this or what?

    Yeah, take out the censors! This is an action piece and should be expressed to the max! :D
    And yes keep writing like this, this could become a comic. I'm imagining the characters in my head and they loook pretty sweet :D

    Ok, that end was just wow...I had to read it again. So there is another, huh? Haha, a kid wiped the behemoth out...awesome. I must know who that is!!! Dude, you writing another?

    yup ive been getting some feedback and pepole are saying that i should continue. so thats what i will do. Look out for the next story arc, in my created world of action the name is : THE FLAMING DAWN... its gonna be awesome and ill take censors off, thanks for the review

    The Flaming Dawn huh and again i will hold a spoiler question.
    I liked behemoth more the golem honestly i liked how you gave him feeling, towards minions people who r sopposed to be tools. u have skills i hope you build on to golems life and all overall nice sneek peak of the arc. Sorry for the late review i was working on a story of my own stay tuned haha

    lol ill check it out and thanks for the review and who knows this might not be the last of behemoth :3

    Nice story i guess.

    lol thanks for taking the time read it and also thanks for the review