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riper3000 ish back! aka.. Ripes aka. shadowrian aka. SDRN . status: Adulting(Help!?) : Anime, V-games, Zombies, Writing(typing :P), Art, Movies newgrounds and Dubstep/EDM Dislikes: nothing much
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thanks for taking the time to read it
its a cute story nice and well formatted but why did he do this why the hell did behemoth attack the swat and y did the swat attack behemoth huh u need purpose in a story ok Rip purpose
actually, all that gets answered in the second part :3 lol im glad you read it though it means a lot and thanks for the advice
well then ,i like ur use of grabbing the readers attention. i cant even do that
lol its the only thing school has taught me efficiently, btw part 2 will be coming in a few days, it will be the final part of the Behemoth Arc. ill continue writing things like this if pepole like my story
AW MAN!!! that was getting good! Can't wait for part 2!!! Brutal! :D
im working on it now... gimme about a day or two, it'll be good :3
shadowRian
BTW when Golem approaches Behemoth he got off his motorcycle by then sorry that wasn't made
clear...